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*** Warning this picture contains giantess VORE. If you are offended by vore, don't enlarge it ***

Featuring Crisis the naga, with the brief participation of Anna the Deluran explorer ^^

In the end I sticked to monochromic colors. I planed at first a normal coloring in bright tones but it would have taken me far more time than I can afford at the moment ^^; I hope you like it :)

EDIT : now avaiable in print ^_^
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:iconm12g:
Well, this is different, to say the least. I'm really not sure what to say, I've never seen this sort of thing. The friend who forwarded it to me says it's vore, which is something that I can't really grasp as a concept, and don't expect a definition from me. But I'm not here to judge. Oh wait, yes I am, I'm just not going to judge personal preferences, just the art piece, which by the way, is actually very nicely drawn. And to be honest, I found the last 3 panels to be humorous. And it taught me what a Naga is, which to put it simply, is like a centaur, only with a snake half instead of a horse half. In short, I came here looking for something different to critique, and I sure as hell found it. So bravo Karbo, you get five stars in impact because I'll definitely remember this. :clap:
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
278 out of 291 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconuserno1004:
I value the need for such works of art like "Naga Vore," but is it really necessary? I mean, why the fuck do we need this!? I mean I enjoy my fair share of fetishes but this has gone too far. At least it's not child porn. so I guess, "good job."

Now, on the actual side of things, I enjoy the structure of the comic. The black and white really suits the idea of mystery with the artwork. Also, the attention to detail in some of the panels is stunning; being able to see such vivid minute details such as the delicate roots on a tree and the natural effects really bring live to this.

The movement (arrangement of panels) of the artwork is also enticing; it keeps the reader following the piece to the end.

However, this is a critique. Some of the more dynamic shifts between panels aren't executed well, and the idea of vore is repetitive on this website. To be honest, the "plot" or idea of this artwork is not at all original (hence the low originality rating).

What I enjoy most about the piece is the contrast of the night panels to the day panels. It really illuminates detail and attracts the eye towards the next panel, and so on.
What do you think?
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3 out of 7 deviants thought this was fair.

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:icongillyrutherford:
GillyRutherford Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017
Me next!
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:iconthatponyflippy:
Thatponyflippy Featured By Owner May 30, 2017
Ahh hunger
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:icongiygasui:
Giygasui Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
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:iconpookiesaurus4:
pookiesaurus4 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016
I've seen this on YouTube (victim clearly got digested) 
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:iconliaminsecret:
LiaminSecret Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
no shit, sherlock.
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:icontaraterror5:
TaraTerror5 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great drawing!
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :3
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:iconashleecat123:
ashleecat123 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Help you are real good at drawing... but you waste talent on this 0-0 but the art is good...
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:icongodlyruler:
GODLYRULER Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016
I think it's an awrsome use.
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:iconkitsunefranchise:
KitsuneFranchise Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016  Student General Artist
I think it's safe to say your one of the best vore artists ever.
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:iconeatenalivebyanime:
EatenAliveByAnime Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist
So... this is where it all began.
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:iconlunicangel:
LunicAngel Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
OMFG STOP
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:iconaceycarbone:
aceycarbone Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
How did this turn Ana into a naga?
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:iconemerald1000:
Emerald1000 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016
I believe it had something to do with Felarya being an anomaly of sorts. There was a disturbance in the universe and that disturbance revived her but rewrote her genetic code, maybe because she was digested by Crisis, but this disturbance turned into a Naga. That's pretty much the long and short of it.
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:iconeatenalivebyanime:
EatenAliveByAnime Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2016  Hobbyist
I have been waiting for someone else to do this since it is against my character, but I suppose I will just have to now.

"At first they're all like: Oh, I want a Naga girlfriend!"
"But then: Hurr durr, don't eat me!"
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:iconmarlinadventures:
MarlinAdventures Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... it's been 10 years!!! :O

I must ask Karbo, did you ever think so much would come of just this one comic? xD
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:iconmacrinso:
Macrinso Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2016  Student General Artist
So many faves and comments
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:iconthoralmir:
Thoralmir Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2016
You ever think that the influence of your art may have helped make Monster Musume a reality?
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner May 2, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
haha i doubt it :D  Fascination of monster girls from Japanese people is something much older than my art as Karbo :3
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:iconeatenalivebyanime:
EatenAliveByAnime Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2016  Hobbyist
Despite eating her alive, Crisis remains good friends with Anna.


Also, it is funny to me that Anna is kicking and fighting with all her might, yet all she manages to do is make Crisis burp. XD
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:iconsarahamsalem:
SarahAmsalem Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016
Holly mama 0-0'
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:iconebonymanta:
EbonyManta Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016
Wow. Crisis is... amazingly cute. Seriously, she looks so adorable! I wanna cuddle her. I must find more art of her!
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner May 2, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like her ! :D
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:iconebonymanta:
EbonyManta Featured By Owner May 14, 2016
I do! So cute. Hmm, do you have any other art of her, or info of her?
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:iconorangepeelmanuh:
orangepeelmanuh Featured By Owner May 16, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
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:iconebonymanta:
EbonyManta Featured By Owner May 27, 2016
Ah, much appreciate it, thanks!
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:iconorangepeelmanuh:
orangepeelmanuh Featured By Owner May 27, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!
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:iconmarlinadventures:
MarlinAdventures Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... It's almost been 10 years...
I'd say this story is about due for a remake ;)
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:iconfenriswo1f:
FenrisWo1f Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Long time fan, first time commenter, figured I'd post on one of your first and my favourite works. It's been incredible watching how much more detail, colour, vibrancy, and just sheer imagination you've brought to your characters and the realm of Felyara. Thank you for not only shaping  this world but letting all of your fans, myself included, play in it.
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for the kind words :D
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:icondarthvader1799:
Darthvader1799 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015
Awesome. I would love to be eaten by a naga, my favorite pred. I bet this guy had...other feelings towards them. Not that it matters now, he's just shit, and soon so will his friends
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:icongiantessuniverse:
GiantessUniverse Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015
I think the victim was a girl. I agree with you, though.
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:icondarthvader1799:
Darthvader1799 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015
Oh, she was a girl. Sorry. Either way, though, I'd love to be in the naga's belly with her
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:iconcossofore:
cossofore Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015
That girl didn't become shit either, that's Anna before she was reborn as a naga.
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:iconmlptransformers:
mlptransformers Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015
that's anna! she becomes an even bigger naga later! not a piece of poo!
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:icondarthvader1799:
Darthvader1799 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015
I want to be her little pet.
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:iconmlptransformers:
mlptransformers Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015
don't we all.
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:icontotalwarishere12:
totalwarishere12 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
Oww mother. Why do I keep finding stuff like this? XD Dont like vore or atleast I hope so. It doesnt mean I am saying your drawings suck or anything. Also makes me want to greet her with my SCRAP MUSKET!!!! BLOW HER TO BITS!! YEAH!! XDDDDD
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:iconsga12:
SGA12 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Student Writer
love it
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:icongirls-and-space:
girls-and-space Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Omf
You
You have no idea how turned on I am by this
This is my favorite one
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:icontimmcjimfrompl:
TimMcJimFromPL Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Nice.
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:iconsailorrob:
sailorrob Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
I wish I could explain why this turns me on so much but damn if it doesn't 
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:iconcardfightvanguard62:
cardfightvanguard62 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Very nice and very cute ^//////^
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:icongalaxymf:
GalaxyMF Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Isn't that just bad luck that we're one of Crisis favorite foods ;__;
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:icongalaxymf:
GalaxyMF Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I'll never jump again
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:iconouiw:
Ouiw Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, why can't we just be friendsWaaaah! 
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ITS BECAUSE WE NEED TO FEED CRISIS-SAMA GODAMMIT!!!!!!!!!
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oh and because we're smaller, weaker and slower than other animals and for some reason no children are going in here because apparently nobody realizes that eating a child would be a cruelty that even nagas couldn't bring themselves to doNo, I disagree! 
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:iconthe-jasmine-nation:
The-Jasmine-Nation Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait, I recognise that girl now. Is that Anna?!
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:icon121199:
121199 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Student General Artist
Yep, that is Anna before she became a Naga.
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:iconhardcorev20:
Hardcorev20 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Will this being continued?
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:iconthebroarthur2:
thebroarthur2 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
are this by any chance crisis and Anna.
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