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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Becky is riding way too high in the water especially as she seems to be supporting part of the victims ship. Way too top heavy and the bit of tail (heh) seems oddly placed making her aft parts out of proportion.
Victims ship has no cannon run out in her firing ports! If I had the Becky overtaking me I'd darn sure have the gun crew haulin' ass.
While there is a cannon missing from the firing port to the left of Becky's head, I would not think that the aft deck cannon would be run out at all. Even if that talking tube in her ear serves as an ear plug, the sound of cannon going off that close would not be pleasant.
Also Becky would suffer massive powder burns if those aft cannon were touched off.
Although the concept is unique and has all kinds of story potential, I'd recommend a complete redesign of the the ship 'strap-on' (hehehehe). Seriously, with the way Becky would ride in the water the ship would almost have to be submersible (although not to any great depth or length of time) plus this would give them an underwater stealth capability. This leads to all kinds of story threads for action scenes. Ah My brain is buzzing, more later.
The way you show a predator with a so innocent face is amazing;
I remind you made a work about one piece; maybe it would be a good idea make a picture with this character and that theme, because of I find this image very good and I think you would have to continue on this purpuse. I end admitting I' m making you compliments but I always found your drawings absolutely wonderful and when I see members making tales and thinking about these images I really enjoy the reading. In practice, seen I draw myself, I find good feelings from your pictures and I hope you continue and do always better.
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