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A picture of Faoran, the Curvaceous Scarlet elf dancing with Tinatalan ( Tina ) who you may have seen if you read the vore comic =p
No ! don't look at that emerald ! ack too late...

Phew I really struggled quite a bit on that perspective. I'm still not totally sure I got things right. But it was fun to do and I definitely want to avoid a bit my sphere of comfort from now on :)
Faroan belongs to :icongwadahunter2222:
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Great attempt at this angle, I'm having the same struggles myself so I know how much of a Nightmare it can be.

The only things that stand out for myself (apart from the obvious lol) is the view of the forground characters head. It looks like we're looking at her face on rather than from below as the POV suggests, also the highlights on the same character are coming from areas I would think should be in shadow as your light source is in the top left.

On the same point more emphasis could have been done on the highlights coming from the top left areas of both characters like you started on the hair of the foreground character... I think the same applys for the shade in the opposing areas to emphasize the contrast and ad to the depth of them both.

That being said I think its a lovely piece The tree details are amazing and the fairies are also a nice touch. I wish I had more balls to try mono colour pieces like these as they really put over a great sense of emotion when done well as this is.

Look forward to seeing more.
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Critique by Raepunsel Apr 28, 2011, 2:13:38 PM
The girls' stomachs are protruding out a little- or a lot. It makes them look pregnant, have just eaten someone, or are just slightly fat/chubby. You also tried using a difficult perspective without truly knowing what you're doing in them, so the result would be disproportionate figures. The girl on the right's hand looks awkward, and her palm is way too thick compared to the rest of her hand. The area where the thumb is should be thicker, while the other side should be more like a flat board. The girls' legs are too thick compared to the rest of their bodies, and the girl on the left's butt looks... really long and large. You should try to use some references when drawing in perspectives such as these, or at least do some careful planning with sketches beforehand.
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amandasweetie Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Very sweet and cool!
Karbo Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :)
Carl188 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Georgous !
DresdenQ Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
MomoHinamoru Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Artist
TjaZeraQT Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Adorable :3
rikudou90 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Beautiful :)
Karbo Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :)
live4ecchi Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
you did really good here again on the point of view
of someone on the ground looking up at them.
you should be very proud of your work its incredible.
SpykeTheHedgehog Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Ugh, pubic hair is so gross. It's repulsive, disgusting and completely unattractive in my opinion. She needs to shave it off. D:
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