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Nege's dance WIP by Karbo Nege's dance WIP by Karbo
Another work in progress ^^

Those are flat colors for now but I plan to have some shading added, and multiple small light sources such as fire, candles and so. And of course actually color the characters.

Please don't hesitate if you have ANY remarks / critiques / suggestions on the composition, anatomy, drawing, or anything really. I'm posting the picture for that purpose :)
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I like this very much. Although it is a work in progress, I still thought I'd talk about some things.

I love the main attraction; she looks quite nice ^^ I've never seen a picture with these . . . . it's very unique. It looks nice in general, the way it's drawn.

I love the detail! To the right of the end of her tail - two people. Very detailed; I would have never drawn them. Just knowing you're going to color the people gives you a thumbs up. I think, minus the background, it looks good the way it is.

The colors are very conceptual; it all being blue and grey. It's an interesting piece, the concept is in it's own a WIN. All of your art has the same thing: ORIGINALITY. (Oximoron?)

Love the two girls to the far right!

Good job! Keep up the good work!

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Wow, one of your Naga's being friendly to people smaller than them and not eating them.

I can't wait to see the finished piece. looks like it is going to be very detailed. I would never dream of trying to color something like this myself... I don't have the patience.
TanyaStoviaka Jul 20, 2010
Nice to see Enishi and Negeyari having fun.

Looking forward to seeing more of this.
Needs more vore.

Wait, you mean you want _helpful_ "remarks / critiques / suggestions"? Crap! =P

To me, it seem like Nege is falling backwards; the center of mass of her torso is far to the right of her centerline.
I find the "fisheye" view a little strange, though I don't know if it is causing any problems in the drawing.
Finally, her torso looks "flat" and "twisted" to me, as if the bottom half is a front view and the top half is a profile view. This will probably go away when you do the lighting.
Karbo Jul 20, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
mhh thank you, those are very valid points ;)
Fenrir-Moon Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I like that the farther away people are blurred juuust right :] And the two drunk girls off to the side are a cute touch :3
I agree that it needs more light sources around the people, but I think its look very good for a work in progress
more detail on the moon would be great. try and make it original to show how felarya is an alien world.
Ah, nice to see a happy scene for once... and the villagers have a neat variety to them. Oh, and the perspective/fisheye view thing look great for a dancing scene like this...

Now make that snake sway to the music!
Looks great so far. :D
Nice. I can't to see the final version. BTW, Is she a naga or a mermaid. The fins, flukes, or whatever they are on her tail have me a bit confused.
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