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A commission for :iconaethernavale:

Uh oh... you have been shrank and you better start running... I'm not too sure about that smile X3

a Pov of Liari, a succubus / fairy hybrid. She usually hide her horns and pose as a regular adventurer in Felarya. But sometimes, someone finds out. And in those case... well you can imagine what happens ^^
I'm quite happy with how the pose came out in the end. thank you very much to those who helped with remarks and critiques during the WIP stage :D

Liari belongs to =aethernavale
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:iconexcelsior-emeritus:
This is quite a good one. You've done well with her feet, something I know is a point of difficulty for you. I also like how the tip of her tongue is poking out between her lips, it's a fitting addition. As usual, the background is detailed well and fits the tone.

However, the shading on Liari's left foot (the one on the right of the image), right below the edge of her trousers seems to 'unbalance' the perceived shape of her foot; it appears to me that it's twisting in some way.
Other things of note are the firey glow around her horns, her hand and inner side of her legs.
The glow is just flat colour. In comparison to the rest of the image it seems a little too simple.
The lower palm of her left and inner leg are a little too sketchy, especially when other parts of the image are well defined.

Overall though, it's well done.
Three and a half for vision, it gets the intended point across in my opinion. I'd ask Aethernavale if it was what he wanted, but he's unavailable. However; knowing him I'm sure it is.

4.5 and 4 stars respectively for Originality and Technique as it's a pose that's uncommon for you and you've done it well.
Three for impact; it's not the most resonant image you've done, but it's not bad.
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goouu amazing

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:iconprissjoy:
~Prissjoy Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist
bad feet ...

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My English no good
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:iconthewinnerofall:
Not sure if horns part the trees and clouds or just glowing.
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:icondthb4dshnr:
To be perhaps a tad bizarre, and particular, I really love how you did the feet in this.
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:iconzerobr:
Beautiful!! :love:

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:iconindigomnr96:
~indigomnr96 Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this looks really good! Is it just me going insane again... or are her horns glowing?

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~TBRay Jan 2, 2012  Student General Artist
She genuinely looks like she's ready to eat something very succulent! lol

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:iconprinnydood-abides:
Absolutely wonderful use of perspective, and Liari looks quite nice all semi-wet :meow: . . . but I suppose it's best not to creep up on her bathing, though. :XD:
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~Hollow-nyan Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
YAAAAY excellent work !!!
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