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Dance under the moonlight by Karbo Dance under the moonlight by Karbo
A commission for :icontora044:

His character, Negeyari in her ceremonial outfit dancing among villagers, under a peaceful moonlight. And Enishi busy with... well being Enishi XD
I had great fun doing that picture. For once I used a wide and open sky and I'm quite happy with the result :)

I hope you will like it ;)
And thanks also to all those who gave me critiques and suggestion in the WIP version, it was very helpful ^_^

Negeyari and Enishi belongs to :icontora044: and :iconserenity-vixen:
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:iconkomandr2465:
Critique by Komandr2465 Apr 25, 2012, 12:12:28 AM
As a whole the work is quite well done. The style is consistent throughout the peace. Negeyari and her relation to the villagers is clearly portrayed as a positive one. The background is well done and not detailed so much as to distract from the focal point. Negeyari's movement is conveyed well through the wind in her outfit. I feel as though the right amount of detail was used on the villagers. Additionally the color choice is quite good. Opting to use shades of blue on the foreground only helped to focus the eyes of the viewer on Negeyari. However I feel as though a large space exists above her head that does not need to be there.
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:icondaiyoukai-sama:
Daiyoukai-sama Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Professional Artist

Seems like she has fun... and the others as well (seldom^^)...

Nice. I like the open sky and faint clouds. Are there special stellar constellation on Felarya's sky? Or zodiac signs.. born under the Naga?^^

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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
ah no they are completely random actually XD
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:iconthehandsomerocklee:
TheHandsomeRockLee Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Is she the guardian deity of the island?
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:iconskmiller:
skmiller Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
One where the people aren't being eaten lol
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:icona3kitsune:
A3Kitsune Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Nice.
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:iconkomandr2465:
Komandr2465 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good job
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:iconrouss93:
rouss93 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Me encanta =) Buen trabajo !!
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:iconvegetarocks:
Vegetarocks Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Student Writer
Nice work. :)
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:iconixzidian2031:
ixzidian2031 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Professional Artist
its like her spiritual dance
fantastic
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you ^_^
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:iconixzidian2031:
ixzidian2031 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Professional Artist
with pleasure
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:iconmrbamboopole:
MrBamboopole Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
It'd be within my best intrests to not go to that . Drinking and giant women DO NOT mix
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:icondragonsrock4ever:
Dragonsrock4ever Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awesome! she appers to be having a blast.
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:iconzillatamer99:
zillatamer99 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks like fun :) I would so join the party
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:iconnoneofurbussiness:
noneofurbussiness Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011
Love this drawing, its got a happy/fun feel to it
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:iconrotago:
Rotago Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
So Enishi is a naga right?
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
a catgirl actually =p
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:iconrotago:
Rotago Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
Sorry I meant Negeyari lol.
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:icontora044:
Tora044 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep a Sea Krait naga. :)
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:iconrotago:
Rotago Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011
thanks :meditate:
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:iconthelizardlord:
TheLizardLord Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010  Student Writer
I like it! :love:
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:icontatsuonna:
Tatsuonna Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
./sigh - I'm going to run out of room in my faves gallery... Another amazing piece - I love the mood!
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:icongojira2006:
Gojira2006 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010
What a cool scene - the perspective is fabulous . . . !
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:iconlouie-holliday:
Louie-Holliday Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
Nice work really love the background.
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:iconshadow1726:
shadow1726 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I love the peaceful Naga's, much more appealing than Crisis
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:icongidala:
Gidala Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow!
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:iconpotatogoji:
potatogoji Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
lol. That's crazy!
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:icondrake-fighter-0127:
drake-fighter-0127 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, very nice
:)
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:iconcree-cree:
Cree-cree Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your the best karbo i always love your art it never gets boring at all :3
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:iconakasaka12:
Akasaka12 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
I LIKE THAT PIC!
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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:icondante8411:
Dante8411 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
It might just be the distance, but her hands look tiny and her neck's a bit thin.
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:iconcyrusnexus:
Cyrusnexus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010
One of the few safe Nagas to be around I suppose. It pays to have friends...especially big ones.
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:iconbahamutrider:
BahamutRider Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
A watchful protector over a prosperig village dancing in the moonlight...

... why does this remind me of Patapon? Pretty easy to imagine that same between level music/chant in this scene too.
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:icondrakague:
Drakague Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love the perpective and colors :)
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:iconjohn-the-ant:
john-the-ant Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010  Student Artist
thanks for removing that hurtful deviation karbo your my best friend *hugs karbo*
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:iconwramirezoide:
WRAMIREZOIDE Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010   General Artist
Excellent POV
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:iconrgaspar:
RGaspar Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
You're my new Haruhi Suzumiya (If you get what it means :P)

O________O
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:icontwilc:
Twilc Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME! I like it!
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:iconmarterx:
marterx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
I like it two thumps up
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:icongreatswordsman:
Greatswordsman Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
Nege looks so cute dancing and happy with all those people! She's one great partier! And her outfit looks grand. :)
Not to mention Enishi seems to be having fun with her new friend as well. :D
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:icony-mangaka:
Y-Mangaka Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waw, another great piece. I especially like the coloring. Congrats. ^^
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thanks ^_^
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:icony-mangaka:
Y-Mangaka Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome. ^^
I really admire your style.
Hope to see more from you soon.
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:iconpovgiantess:
PovGiantess Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
This is really cute! I like the expression on her face. :) PG
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:iconjohn-the-ant:
john-the-ant Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Artist
hey why was my submissions in the felarya group declined
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
well your ideas don't really fit with the restof the world.. I think you could look a bit more on the wiki ^^;
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:iconjohn-the-ant:
john-the-ant Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Student Artist
what im trying to do is to add more non humanoid creatures in felarya to make it more diverse. plus hymnopterus gigas is humanoid because it stands upright. im not realy that good at drawing anime.
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:iconnebulax2684:
nebulax2684 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
it was an awsome peics and i lover your use of lines and tone
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:iconjohn-the-ant:
john-the-ant Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Artist
hey i made you some facinating characters for felarya storyline
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