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Hey it's Crisis! :3  And she looks happy to see you :D

This picture took me quite a while but I wanted to make something special for Crisis ^_^ Thanks a lot to every people who gave me some advices and criticism during the WIP ! it helped a lot !  :)
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What a great way to end off your speed painting month, with this great new look at Felaryas main character. The result of putting so much focus into developing your painting style recently shines through here :).

Your compositions are always strong but this one still surprised me greatly with how you arranged it! This is probably one of the most original methods of creating a V shaped composition I have seen in a while. Using the trunk of that brightly lit tree to the right coming closer to us for one side of the v, and the river flowing down and away from us out into the clearing on the left to create the other side. It's a pretty genius move in using two aspects which interact oppositely in their relation to the picture plane to form the compositional base :D.

Then we have Crisis herself presented right at the top of the V, her horizontal orientation creating a triangle, guiding our view in a cyclic pattern around the scene, then you have her hand framed in the center of the triangle. These two formal aspects combined really help the context of the image, my view tending to look all around the triangle as if for a place to escape being caught! Along that same line I love how you've placed crisis' face blocking the possible view of the outer expanse' where otherwise (despite the extreme height) we might have seen as a sort of a passage of escape, but is instead is blocked by crisis' warm open mouth smile which has that same sense of freedom about it in her carefree expression, but knowing the context of felarya, is also unnerving =P.

The tension between the two sources of peril is a very well created aspect to this work that I really enjoy. We have both the insanely high, organic cliff we are positioned on and a hungry giant naga jumping at us! This tension I feel is manifest best in the bottom middle area where we have the two forces contesting with each other through crisis' outstretched hand and the darkest part of the crevice right below it.

The dark drop below, for me is definitely the more scary of the two at first sight and really makes crisis hand all the more welcoming, especially tied in with her playfull expression. If I didn't know better I could almost assume that I was being rescued :D. But then you've also put that darker shading on her hand, reminding me of the fate connected with falling into that grasp and also the imminence of its approach which sends me looking once again for an escape, which is, again, where that triangle composition really starts working.

Crisis is presenting herself awesomely in so many ways that come together to really solidly show her character and body together as a whole. Her blown back hair and the fluttering leaves around her communicate so well the speed of her lunge, showing her youthful activeness. Her far arm already stretching to grab the trees on the other side of the cliff lets us know of her finessed control of her movements showing her practiced technique of treetop navigation. Then there's also her implied bursting from the thick vegetation and the revealing of her snake half, which really pushes her wild and predatory side. the decision to include a scale pattern on crisis' snake half is an interesting one :) I like it, but I feel it just needs a little more developing to coincide with the curves of the surface rather than being a flat texture.

The foliage in this one is rendered just awesomely, it really does feel like a real overgrown environment! The variance in shades of green, their organic layering and arrangement and the implied dark depths within the leaves, it really does make the scene feel truly wild! I especially enjoy the implied overhanging canopy created by your lighting and that bunch of leaves drooping down in front crisis' hair :), it makes the whole area feel sort of like an enclosed cave of leaves. And then you have the slight filtering down from above and the side giving a very warm summery feeling to the image.

As for improvement on this one, its mostly on the smaller aspects of the environment that could be tweaked to further the illusion.

The one things that drew my attention as sort of disharmonious was the rendering of the landscape out in the distance, it feels a bit too inorganic compared to the foreground elements i think. like there's a field and then all of a sudden a line of trees that starts very abruptly. Personally I feel as if the clearing itself is out of place considering how forested the foreground is, and I think the work might benefit from rendering that area as if it were jungle treetops, especially when you consider the densely forested setting around Crisis territory.

and concerning the foreground elements...

There is a small spot at the top of the foremost tree trunk that I feel is rendered a bit strangely and I'm having a hard time placing exactly what it's trying to describe, whether its vines wrapped around the trunk, or if the top of the tree is broken off, or if the trunk is just extending up into the shadows.

The larger red birds is another thing that's throwing me off a bit, they seem just a bit blobby, I love the large brushstroke aesthetic you use in your paintings and i don't think its necessarily more detail that they need, but perhaps instead just a finessing of the general shape of their anatomy. The concerned looking green tiger thing feels as if he has much more structure and I can more tell what its up too, while with the orange birds it's a bit hard to tell their orientation and structure, its a small point but I do notice it, especially since their so close to Crisis adorable face drawing us in to look closer :).

Altogether This is definitely my new favorite of your works and has really renewed by liking for Crisis :). The sense of movement distance and size you've managed in this one is really compelling, there are little tweaks that could be done to improve it, but the initial response was complete captivation :D Awesome work! And very inspiring for my own artistic practice :).
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This is another beautiful picture; I can't speak for the technical elements, though the lighting is gorgeous, but what really strikes me is the impression of speed. We don't often get that; we are *told* that Felaryan predators are fast but most pictures show them at rest, enjoying a meal. This is the first one that I've seen which conveys that sense of grace and strength.
Moreover, once again you've managed to capture scale perfectly and yet the contrast of a truly gigantic predator moving through tree branches is amazing; again, it's something we're told about, but rarely see.
Finally... well it's Crisis; she's always a pleasure to see and the look of joy on her face is infectious. I can't tell if she's just moving through the trees and happened to see a snack, or if she's merely reaching for another handhold and glad to be alive. Either way, it's a stunning picture. Thank you.
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money64367347 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
HAUL AAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
What is literally up with her singing? I sure it's not that bad.
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money64367347 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
aw crap singing. mind if I smoke? CIGARS ARE EVIL  oh go away
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Wait what?
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money64367347 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
reference to futureama  or a tf2 spoof of that
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
So wait if all humans shrunk and was put in this world we would probably be extinct in about.... 2 days
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money64367347 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
well if we had nukes.....................
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
That profile pic is creepy
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money64367347 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
well that's actually me
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
You should go to a morgue
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money64367347 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
WAT?
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Nothing......
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money64367347 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014
its supposed to be intimidating
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
Unless we had proper equipment....nukes anyone?
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I'm back
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
..."you got swallowed again didn't you?"
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
(This is a joke)

Lol wanna talk about the storm troopers and Star Wars XD
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
....*looks down* yes...
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
"I guess it's an average day in Felarya"
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Psshh more like typical I bet your not surprised anyway
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
"I got out of one of Melany's traps. Tell you the truth it's pretty simple to escape them"
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol you done with your date?
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
She and her mother just slithered away. 
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Aww maybe next time
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
"Naga love...it does that." Pats your back.
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
We'll while you were on your date I WAS STUCK INSIDE A CERTAIN NAGA thanks for the help I had to walk alllll the way back home on my way home I got swallowed by Vivan and guess who was waiting for me at home CRISIS!!
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Seems like a typical day
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's been 2 hours I need you to talk to me man *tear drops* I don't want you to go down like this you can't die you never die!!! I'm going to Crisis myself and I'm asking her if she says she did I'm killing myself I can't stay in this world alone*cries*
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Busy...
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I thought you were dead
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Busy
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
You still busy?
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Just finished. Enjoyed an evening with my girl, we had a little campfire going and had some tea. 
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
You haven't texted back in a while I'm starting to wonder if you got eaten and digested I hope not text me back ASAP your scarring me
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Anyway you need any favors I mean you did save my life
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Agreed! Get the MOAB!!!!
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
Or we just make the digestion horrible and shock them from the inside. Maybe even hook armor where there is downward pointing spikes hooking into the flesh while descending like how something swallows porcupine. Tons of thing in which will make them have pain.
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Edited Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
No. No no you have know idea you do know that crisis stomach is able to with stand the explosion of a grenade right? And the barriers won't work all we can really do is convince a giant 100 feet tall naga that we're not her food!!! o-o digestion will be painful though
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
Or we just ask her to sing. Also I still like the porcupine armor idea I thought of with swallowing it. Having the quils barb into the internal throat flesh.
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Anyway I going out to hunt for food hopefully no ones hunting me for food
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GalaxyMF Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I like the idea too but even if we did cause damage to her we're still gonna die plus what if we get caught off gaurd and just swoops down and catches you in her mouth?Then what?Shes still gonna digest the armor too all we can really hope is that we don't run into her...
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Graphicspark84 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014
The point is, as said, something swallowing a porcupine. So in other words you get stuck in her throat, she gags and spits you out because of the lack of air. Even thought she is around 100 feet tall we see the throat bulge therefore the prey can be larger than the diameter of the throat.

With that I think the tongue with be scraped in result as well.

Also what is the deal with her singing anyway? I can see how it can be off key but seriously it couldn't be that bad.
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Kodimarto Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014   Filmographer
Very beautiful. :)
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Karbo Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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Kodimarto Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014   Filmographer
You're welcome. :) I like your character Anna she's pretty interesting. :)
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DoubleA2015 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Hey Cri-
...Oh, Crap... :(
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money64367347 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
lulz
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NEMU-RULES Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
this is sooo cute
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Karbo Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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NEMU-RULES Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
how much for one may i ask??
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