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Check and mate p27 by Karbo Check and mate p27 by Karbo
*** Warning this picture contains giantess VORE. if Vore offends you, then don't enlarge this picture ****

A preview of the Page 27 of the upcoming vore comic :)
Yep It's the following of the previous page and I believe I will upload the continuation as the next one ^^
You can also expect a teaser pretty soon ;3

The comic is now available here : www.e-junkie.com/karbo/product… :)
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:iconteshwan99:
Although I do not usually critique a story scene off of one slide, since this one popped up as particularly interesting. First I'd like to compliment your use of angles on the strokes giving the reader a visual understanding of where the prey is going without having to think too much. It also shows that this page is more fast paced and the only reason that the woman has not been swallowed (yet I presume) is due in fact to her quick thinking of propping her feet against the back of the throat and pushing herself back towards the tongue. Smart move if you ask me knowing anatomy, but that's another story. I'd also like to compliment the graphics and clear quality of the picture. The reader does not have to fill in gaps with his/her mind. Lots of pictures with lots of action, but little movement in the story. Bravo.

There is one thing I did find a bit off though. In frame three, the smallest one, the reader can clearly see that the girl is tearing up. Probably about to scream or cry, yet I don't find a single word written in. If this is a silent story or a slideshow with a written story underneath then don't take the criticism to heart, but if it is suppose to have sounds or words, which I took from the sound effects, then it leaves the reader wondering why she didn't at least scream.

Aside from that I commend you for your fabulous job with this piece and wish you good luck in the future.
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:iconhydramalgus7:
hydramalgus7 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  New member
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconigak124:
iGak124 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
Weeeeeeeeeee!
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:iconthroughdarkdepths:
ThroughDarkDepths Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
:love: The details!  Oh man, the details!!!
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:iconlectin:
Lectin Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
What is the tonsil for again?
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:iconralphire:
ralphire Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
carries t-cells and most of the white blood cells for the immune system.
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:iconjublianttroo:
JubliantTroo Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Really well done, looks so cool c:
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:iconsupersoldierofchrist:
supersoldierofchrist Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
cool
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:iconameline1111:
ameline1111 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
it's disgusting... i LOVE it ! <3
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Mhh can I ask you from where have you ended on this page ? :)  I am curious, it seems suddenly there has been a lot of people coming here o.o
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:iconzeromkx:
ZeroMKX Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It is because your front page is on deviantart's front page.
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I see. It's very strange, it has been uploaded more than one year ago o.o
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:iconpwney:
Pwney Featured By Owner Edited Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yea DeviantArt makes no sense.  Somehow some really old art will just become the most popular thing ever when it should have received an audience back when it was originally uploaded.
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:iconwholesomewriter32:
wholesomewriter32 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Might as well add mature and Clicking or not it is disturbing.
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:iconcanttel:
canttel Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Sadly i agree
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:iconwholesomewriter32:
wholesomewriter32 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student General Artist
You shouldn't be ashamed of not liking a type of fetish man. 
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:iconcanttel:
canttel Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oh no, i dont like this 
i just sadly agreed it should be put to mature conent because when i saw this i didnt know what the hell it was lol
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:iconwholesomewriter32:
wholesomewriter32 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Didn't say you did.

True but it is weird.
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:iconblogybo:
blogybo Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student General Artist
gross :)
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:iconoctohat:
OctoHat Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
what is VORE? some1 explain lel
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:icongillspar:
gillspar Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
(Insert Attack On Titan music here) ;) (Wink) 
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:iconigak124:
iGak124 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
I fucking wish aot had sexy female titans. There is one but she doesnt swallow anyone :/
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:iconpwney:
Pwney Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Vore is the weirdest thing ever.
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:iconnyanoha:
Nyanoha Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
until you discover "Guro" or "R-18G". . . 
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:iconpwney:
Pwney Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's hilarious because I just came off of a site named "bestgore"

But yea.  Some weird stuff exists out there.
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:iconcanttel:
canttel Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Wdf o.0

u know theres a sits called
truegore .....(i think) i cant remember well. My best friend told me abou it.
she said its a rlly gory site that will most likely make you shit your pants.
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:iconpwney:
Pwney Featured By Owner Edited Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yea there are a bunch of gore sites.  I've seen so much of it that I guess I'm just not that affected by it anymore.  

I looked up truegore but the search results gave me bestgore so it's probably the same thing.
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:iconcanttel:
canttel Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yea and also i heard about lemon party, gaotse and another site but forgot. I think it might have been bestgore all along and not truegore. The only scary site's ive been on so far is creepypasta (which isnt scary but kne of the storys made me realy paranoid) and a porn tab my dad left open when i was little ;-;
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:iconpwney:
Pwney Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha well lemon party is a thing where these people drink each other's pee which is gross.  Idk what gaotse is.  The creepy pasta that creeped me out the most was The Rake.. and an SCP monster.
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:iconcanttel:
canttel Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ewwww i looked lemon party up and i have to wash my eyes out with brain bleach!
do you hav a link to rake cp story maybe...? :0
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:iconearworm365:
earworm365 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
I love the details of your giantess' stomachs and how they struggle to try to get out of the digesting belly
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:iconzainzin:
zainzin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
i wish i am the sliding inside her throat Heart 
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:icongaryfucking0ak:
GaryFucking0ak Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
This is finamimal do more like this please.
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:iconyowassup:
yowassup Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wild ride!
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:iconguesswho12345:
Guesswho12345 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing! you are the best POV vore artist i have ever seen!
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you ^_^
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:icondoublea2015:
DoubleA2015 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Poor...Bishop? What chess piece is she supposed to be?
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:icondoublea2015:
DoubleA2015 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Oh...nevermind.
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:iconmetalphreak83:
metalphreak83 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
nice
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:iconstackhouse01:
stackhouse01 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
slippy fun slide
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:iconkittymiria:
KittyMiria Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
.-. Karbo.. I was playing chess when I clicked on this with my friend and then I ate her c:
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
heh XD
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:iconkittymiria:
KittyMiria Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
X3
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:iconnostromogts:
nostromogts Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
Can't wait to read page 28, and 29, and 30 and ....
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:iconkramooo:
kramooo Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
does this mean i cant get her back even if i get my pawn to the other side
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:iconbloodlust-ninja:
Bloodlust-Ninja Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Looks like black wins this round, haha.
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:iconthemeancanadian:
TheMeanCanadian Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, but I feel the uh... fleshyness of the throat may have been slightly overdone. But oooh that still makes me warm and giddy inside :P
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:iconginbug:
Ginbug Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it's like a water slide! :P Another great set of pics, Karbo.
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:icondonutwish:
Donutwish Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
To me, Karbo will always be the undisputed master when it comes to macro/micro predators and prey. Being able to design a complex sequence of events such as this to fit on one page is so much harder than it looks. It's a pleasure to see such a well-designed page.
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much for the compliment ^_^
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:iconotherworldpublishing:
I would like to know if there will ever be a sequel to the Felarya Manga.
But i'm seriously looking forward to this one!
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