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Check and mate p27 by Karbo Check and mate p27 by Karbo
*** Warning this picture contains giantess VORE. if Vore offends you, then don't enlarge this picture ****

A preview of the Page 27 of the upcoming vore comic :)
Yep It's the following of the previous page and I believe I will upload the continuation as the next one ^^
You can also expect a teaser pretty soon ;3
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:iconteshwan99:
Although I do not usually critique a story scene off of one slide, since this one popped up as particularly interesting. First I'd like to compliment your use of angles on the strokes giving the reader a visual understanding of where the prey is going without having to think too much. It also shows that this page is more fast paced and the only reason that the woman has not been swallowed (yet I presume) is due in fact to her quick thinking of propping her feet against the back of the throat and pushing herself back towards the tongue. Smart move if you ask me knowing anatomy, but that's another story. I'd also like to compliment the graphics and clear quality of the picture. The reader does not have to fill in gaps with his/her mind. Lots of pictures with lots of action, but little movement in the story. Bravo.

There is one thing I did find a bit off though. In frame three, the smallest one, the reader can clearly see that the girl is tearing up. Probably about to scream or cry, yet I don't find a single word written in. If this is a silent story or a slideshow with a written story underneath then don't take the criticism to heart, but if it is suppose to have sounds or words, which I took from the sound effects, then it leaves the reader wondering why she didn't at least scream.

Aside from that I commend you for your fabulous job with this piece and wish you good luck in the future.
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:iconearworm365:
I love the details of your giantess' stomachs and how they struggle to try to get out of the digesting belly
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:iconzainzin:
i wish i am the sliding inside her throat Heart 
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:icongaryfucking0ak:
This is finamimal do more like this please.
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:iconyowassup:
yowassup Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wild ride!
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:iconguesswho12345:
Amazing! you are the best POV vore artist i have ever seen!
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:iconkarbo:
Karbo Mar 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you ^_^
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:icondoublea2015:
Poor...Bishop? What chess piece is she supposed to be?
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:icondoublea2015:
Oh...nevermind.
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:iconmetalphreak83:
metalphreak83 Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
nice
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stackhouse01 Feb 8, 2013
slippy fun slide
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