A research page for Chalyssea, the chess opponent of Menyssan in that upcoming vore comic I'm doing :3
She is a from a noble family, so she wears some fancy clothes.. or what passes for "clothes" among succubi XD Yeah we'll use the word ornament. She looks innocent like that but don't be fooled, she is one of the naughtiest character I have created X3 The designs are just research at this point but please don't hesitate to say if there is one you think is better! I might just pick it in the end
I really like this. Great job with this character profile page. You showed Chalyss from the front and the back, as well as with varied expressions. I really like your color choice. She's so simple, but she's beautiful. I like her smile. The "ornaments" are very nice and creative too!
Her horn is a bit bizarre. Maybe it's color should be closer to her tail? or white like her skin? But the size is fine. The horn makes her look like the Touhou character Yuugi Hoshiguma!
I like your sketchy technique. No, I love your sketchy technique, and the coloring of the background.
I agree that the horn looks out of place a bit. I think its just too rigid to fit on a sensually curved, cute little demon. That said, the outfit on the bottom right does two things in my opinion; it adds a couple more sharp angles which makes the horn seem less sudden or out of place and i think it does a great job of communicating sexiness and wealth. Only the outfit above it looks more like that of a demonic debutante.
Her horn is a bit bizarre. Maybe it's color should be closer to her tail? or white like her skin? But the size is fine. The horn makes her look like the Touhou character Yuugi Hoshiguma!
I like your sketchy technique. No, I love your sketchy technique, and the coloring of the background.
i enjoy the variations in expression in the bottom left sketches, and the simplicity in the top left drawings are very nice.
for outfits, i enjoy the first one and the second to the last designs.
For the hairstyle perhaps play with it being less symmetrical.
have you thought about different colors for both skin and hair?
I fell overall you have done very well with this set, i look forward to other ideas you have.
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